Writing
Clearly on Deadline
By
STEVE BUTTRY, Writing Coach
Omaha World-Herald
If
possible, write as you report. For instance, if you're
working a story by phone, you're going to have some dead
time, maybe a few seconds at a time, when you're on hold
or waiting for someone to answer, maybe a few minutes while
you're waiting for people to return calls.
Start
putting the information from your last interview into story
form. Even if you don't know where it will go in the
story yet, start writing paragraphs that will fit somewhere.
Write a lede based on what you know so far. In addition
to starting your writing, this helps sharpen the focus of
the reporting that remains.
Writing
as you report allows you to continue your reporting closer
to deadline. Writing in chunks, with frequent interruptions
as you return to reporting, can lead to choppy writing.
You need to fix this by using some of the time you save
to read back through the story to make it flow smoothly.
If you are at the scene and need to run back to the newsroom
to report, you can't physically write as you report. But
start writing or outlining the story in your head or in
your notebook during moments when you find yourself waiting.
Identify
the minimum story. Decide early what your minimum story
is, the story that answers the basic who, what, when, where
questions. This is the story that meets basic levels of
journalistic competence and allows you to keep drawing a
paycheck next week. This is your first goal.
Identify
the maximum story. The maximum story is the story that
readers will be talking about at work and in coffee shops
the next day. This is the story that your editors and readers
will remember, that marks you as a star performer. This
story may answer difficult how, why, so what, or how much
questions, or it may address the who-what-when-where questions
in greater depth. The maximum story will have such enticing
elements as setting, plot, characters, and dialogue. You
are looking for elements that might make this story especially
memorable.
Secure
the minimum, then pursue the maximum. If you are not
on deadline, you might gather the information for the minimal
story fairly early, then build incrementally to the maximum
story. Or you might start with some of the information for
the maximum story and spend a lot of time with that, knowing
you'll be able to fill in the basics later.
On
deadline, you want to identify immediately the potential
sources who could provide the information for the minimum
story and get the information from them as quickly as possible.
Then you zero right in on the sources who might provide
the maximum story. Maybe you can't get the maximum story
on deadline. It might be a second-day story or a Sunday
follow-up. But go for it. If you don't land the maximum
story, you're likely to gather material that will improve
on the minimum story.
Reassess
frequently. Before and after each interview, assess
quickly what you still need to nail down the minimum or
maximum story. Go quickly to those elements in your questioning.
Go to the sources who will provide that sort of information.
If
you don't have time to interview all the desired sources,
avoid those who will waste your time with redundant information.
For instance, in a crime or disaster story, one official
source may provide all the basic information for your minimal
story. Once you get that information, you might want to
focus your energy on unofficial sources who can give your
story greater human dimension, rather than going to other
official sources. However, if you haven't identified the
unofficial sources yet, other official sources may help
lead you to them.
This tip was used with permission from Steve
Buttry, writing coach and national correspondent at
the Omaha World-Herald. Steve also offers writing
workshops; for more information, please contact him.
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